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Final Thoughts
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The rest of him is pimping his album, so I guess it’s time to go to my final thoughts. Now, I’m going to come off as really rusty as I haven’t done this in years.
[beat starts up]
Your lame attempt at reviewing J-Cole was just not good
Because your head seems to be as hard as wood
To the idea that hip hop came from a place called the hood
Something that J-Cole wanted to rap about because he could
I understand you wish to rap about murder and death
You’re free to fuckin’ do so like your lady macbeth
But on the chance that you can get off your meth
And be able to listen for a sec and take a breath, listen
When you want to rant about repetition work on your diction
Rap isn’t a jurisdiction there should be no restriction
J has a different depiction of what’s an infliction
Just as you do too you fucking walking contradiction
Yeah, a lot of your complaints can go to your bomb
Like the repetitious beats, you take hard snare drums to prom
That complaint is a bad joke you could make it a sitcom
“G-Mo Skee makes up complaints just to have a qualm”
Now who started complaints about a repetitious hook? G…
Which one comes off like they never picked up a book? G…
I wonder who it could possibly be, let’s see
I don’t think it’s J-Cole and it certainly isn’t me… Gee
[talking]
My point is if you’re going to try to pimp out your own album by poking at another album, the least you can do is at least acknowledge the fault in your own music… else you come off as really fucking dumb and kinda just ignant to your own stuff. Alright.
But wait, I’m not done, there’s a little more to this, see?
Because as underground goes it’s fucked like the Joshua Tree
It’s not as carefree as you’d like it to be, is it G?
Because if you want to go platinum, there’s really no guarantee
So instead of getting good a fucking tantrum you throw
Because let’s be honest, you’re about as tolerant to other rap as Necro
Wouldn’t be surprised if you thought hip hop died a long time ago
Because watching this video right here is an honest to god shitshow.
[talking]
Alright I threw in some last potshots in there, now that I’m done being your white noise for the hundred and thirty-eighth time I think I shall take a few months away from commentaries, get some R&R...
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Doodletones Denver, Colorado
I have never made anything of quality.
A lot of the music on here was when I was still a young
teenager who didn't know like... anything? Those have mostly been labelled as "Lil' Scribble" stuff.
Though don't expect anything past those to be good either, I'm not good at this, and idk if I ever will be.
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